Joined: 24 May 2004 Location: Flanders (Be) Posts:300000001
Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2014 11:33 am Post subject:
Proofreading
Subject description: campaign text...
Your campaign text can really need some proofreading. I start the first Nod mission and immediately see "let's raid this city and it's puny rebel fighters".
For the record? "it's" is short for "it is", making that sentence "let us raid this city and it is puny rebel fighters".
There are a bunch more like it, just in the first mission and its briefing... if you want me to go over them for you, I'd gladly do that for you guys. _________________ QUICK_EDIT
If you would be willing to proof-read tutorial.ini I'd be very grateful for the help, it's something I don't have time to do myself as I have to take care of many other things. QUICK_EDIT
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